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Reading the same genre while writing: good or bad?

February 6, 2009 in Fantasy, Novel, On Writing

Here’s a dilemma I’ve been wrestling with.  Is it a good idea for a writer to read the same genre as their novel while they are writing it?

Writers are taught to read a lot in order to help them with their writing.  And not just the same genre you wish to write – but anything and everything you can get your hands on.

I’m working on a fantasy novel right now, and to some extent I think my limited fantasy reading experience is an advantage because I’m aiming for something slightly different to what’s already out there.  However, should I be reading more fantasy novels while I am writing my novel?

On the one hand, it will help me learn from published fantasy writers, see what it is that made their works successful, get a feel for the nuances of the genre.  On the other hand, I’m afraid I’ll start subconsciously trying to emulate their writings – not just in style, but also plot and characters – and it will take me away from what I wanted to accomplish at the beginning.

Are there any writers out there who have any tips on what to do?

PS: the fantasy novels I have available to me right now are classics such as Terry Brooks’ The Sword of Shannara Trilogy and Raymond E Feist’s Magician.

Building a Fantasy World

February 2, 2009 in Fantasy, Novel, On Writing

I haven’t really done many posts on the fantasy side of writing so far, so I thought I’d start one few.  This first one is about building fantasy worlds, and the next two will also be related.  I’m no expert on this, so it’s really just my own personal opinion and knowledge from things I’ve read.

fantasy-world-2The importance of world building

If you are writing a fantasy novel (as I am), you simply cannot afford to skip this step.  You can have the greatest story ever imagined, but it won’t work if you don’t have a world for it to take place in.

As fantasy stories tend to take place in worlds different to ours, it’s particularly important that the parameters of a writer’s fantasy world are clearly defined before the actual writing commences.  It doesn’t necessarily have to be the very first thing you do – you can create your characters or develop your plot first – but you will have to at least have a fair idea of how your fantasy world operates before you begin.  There are several reasons for this.  First, the world can shape your characters and your plot by putting everything in perspective.  Your characters’ motives or the plot you’ve planned might not make sense in the wrong context.  Second, it can help you visually imagine your scenes better when you write.  Third, your writing will flow a lot smoother if you don’t have to stop every two minutes to think about the characteristics of your world to ensure things still make sense.

Some common things in your fantasy world to figure out may include:

  • Races
  • Geography
  • History
  • Fauna and Flora
  • Food
  • Political/Economic Structure
  • Religion
  • Magic
  • Technology
  • Weapons
  • Architecture
  • Languages
  • Culture

The list goes on and on.  There’s no limit to how extensive your world building can be.

Use your imagination

This is the best time to let your imagination fly.  As long as it’s not too stupid, give it a shot.  If your friends laugh at the idea, then it might be good to think of something else.  Try and think outside the box – everyone will tend to stick to things they know or seen or read before.  There’s nothing wrong with cliches if you can pull it off, but the best way to distinguish your world from the ones that have already been done to death is to make it unique.  It doesn’t need to be revolutionary; it could be subtle differences – as long as it makes an impression on the reader you’ve succeeded.

You don’t need to tell the reader every facet of your world in your novel – it is really more for your own benefit than anything else.  Fantasy novels no longer start with the Tolkien-style prologue that explains the whole world to the reader before the story begins.  You can try, but most authors prefer to leak details of the world bit by bit to their readers to keep things interesting.  There’s no need to reveal the mundane details of everyday life in the world – stick to descriptions that are necessary to keep the story moving along.

It should also be pointed out that there is nothing wrong with continuing to develop your world as you write, to refine and add more detail to it, as long as it does not contradict what you’ve already written or the rest of the story.

fantasy-world-1My experience

Tolkien’s Middle-Earth is usually always the starting point for fantasy worlds.  There’s nothing wrong with starting from there and then build in unique characteristics to make your own world unique.

For me, my starting point was some old RPG video games I played as a kid (which, not surprisingly, featured plenty of elements from Tolkien’s world).  It was something that had been done a million times before, but it didn’t stop me from thinking it was an awesome story.  But as I started exploring this world, the story began taking its own shape.  Thing started to evolve.  I changed a few of the races to make it more interesting; I changed the characteristics and culture of the existing races; I changed the interaction and history between the races.  Before I knew it, the story was taking a life of its own.  I then started developing religions, and created an entire history of the world, including a detailed time line.  I began researching weapons and mythical creatures, architecture, horticulture – I just took myself on a journey into the fantasy world I created.  And it was extremely fun.

By the time I was done, nothing was the same as I had originally envisioned it (in a good way).  Now when I write the novel, the visual images just appear in my mind.  I no longer have to stuggle to imagine what the world looks like.  It’s made my writing a lot smoother and easier.

Lastly, just two words of advice.

First, don’t get too carried away with the world building or else you’ll never start writing.  Try and stick with the things that will affect the story that is being told in your novel.

Second, be as imaginative as you want, but still try and keep things inherently logical and coherent.  Readers can only suspend belief if you make it possible for them to do so.  You will turn them off your story if your world is contradictory or doesn’t make sense as a matter of logic.

Resources

There a lot of different resources on fantasy world building out there that explain things a lot better than I can.

‘Creating a Realistic Fantasy World’ by Penny Ehrenkranz is a good starting point for those who want to read more about this subject.

Comprehensive Q&A from the SFWA on Fantasy Worldbuilding by Patricia C Wrede.

Article from SFWA on Building New Worlds by Stephen Baxter.

Magical World Builder by Stephanie Cottrell Bryant.

The world building page from the excellent Elfwood Tutorials by Michael James Liljenberg.

From the master herself, Creating the Fantasy World by Sara Douglass.

A couple of articles on fantasy world building from Fantasy Fiction Factor (the online magazine for fantasy writers) – World Building for Science Fiction and Fantasy by Tina Morgan and World Building 101 by Lee Masterston

Other links: Fantasy Worldbuilding Resources site (including recommended books).

Writing Programs and a comprehensive review of NewNovelist 2

February 1, 2009 in On Writing

Why use a writing program?

What should be made clear from the outset is that a writing program will not help you write your novel.  You still have to do all the hard work yourself.  But it can help make life a little easier.

Most established writers frown upon software or programs that purport to assist writers with their writing, whether it’s a novel or a screenplay.  But for newbies to novel/sceenplay writing (like me), such programs can be exteremly helpful.  It can assist new writers who are unfamiliar with the craft to organise their ideas and characters, to build their story in a systematic and more efficient manner. 

It’s certainly not for everyone.  People who already have their own preferred styles of approaching writing may find it distracting.  I’ve also heard people say that most of the functions in these writing programs can be found in Microsoft Word – you just need to learn how to use it.

The writing program I’m using to write my novel is called NewNovelist (version 2).  I came across it by accident, in one of those Facebook ads on the side of the page that I normally don’t look at twice.  You can still get 10% off if you purchase it using the code bk456.  Read more about the program at the NewNovelist  website.  (NB: If you google ‘writing program’ or ‘writing software’, NewNovelist is the program that will come up most frequently)

NewNovelist 2

I have never used specialist writing software before, so there’s not much I can compare NewNovelist to.  I’ve only heard that NewNovelist 2 is a huge upgrade on the first version of the program.

Why did I get it?

So why did I get a writing program?  Well, I’ve said this a few times already, but I had been working on my fantasy novel on and off for 7 years.  The writing was extremely sporadic – I’d work on it when I felt like it and only on scenes I felt like writing.  Nothing was chronological or consistent.  I wrote some on the computer, occasionally on loose sheets of paper, and mostly in notebooks.  It was all over the place.  Some plot points would contradict each other.  Other times I would forget character or place names.  It just became very hard to organise.  It’s not the main reason but it was one of the reasons why the novel never really got off the ground.

So when I saw NewNovelist by chance, I took it as a sign.  The advertisements made the product seem good enough.  So I gave it a shot.  Without the 10% discount, it costs US$54.99 by download or US$59.99 for download + a CD copy.  I went with the download option.  The download was very fast and the installation was smooth.

I discuss some of the program’s features and problems below.  However, so far I have been pleased with it.  Would I be writing my novel without it?  Probably.  But at that point in time, New Novelist was exactly what I needed to give myself that extra push, that little nudge to get me started.  I haven’t stopped writing since.

Features

Wizard phase

The first main feature of New Novelist is that it starts with a writing wizard that guides you through the introductory stages of your novel.  This entails 4 steps:

1. Choosing a name (mine is still ‘Untitled’)

2. Deciding a story concept (describing your story in a couple of sentences)

’3. Choosing the story category (Plot, Epic or Character)

4. Choosing the story type (many to choose from, depending on your category)

Depending on your choices in steps 3 and 4, the wizard will give you pre-determined pointers on how your story should progress.  This is really for writers who are just beginning, and probably don’t have an idea of which direction they want to go in.  Personally, this was a little useless for me as I already had a specific idea of how my story was going to run and the key plot points were pretty much decided.  For the record I chose ‘Plot’ for my story category and ‘Chase’ for my story type.

Unique side panels

After the wizard stage, the program takes you into the main page.  It looks like a typical Microsoft Word page, but with less toolbar functions at the top.  But it has two very special features which makes it unique – two panels on either side that allow you to explore various aspects of your story.

The left panel is labelled ‘Chapter’ and has underneath it the phases your novel should go through.  Under each phase, there are pointers on what you should write about, how long that phase should be in the context of the novel length, and real life examples from other well-known novels.  You start off with the generic ones that are given to you because of the story type you have chosen.  I found the tips a little helpful, but if you have your own idea of what the novel should be like, you can just ignore it.  However, the good thing is that you can add extra phases any way you like, and you can write in short summaries of what takes place in that phase yourself.  I found this function to be a lot more useful.

The right panel is labelled ‘Resources’, and I think this is what makes NewNovelist useful for me.  Under this panel, there are several sub-categories: Characters, Places, Objects and Research & Ideas.  This will allow you to flesh out your characters (appearance, personality, etc – you can even put in a picture), the places and objects in their world.  The program can even generate thousands of sample names, places and objects for you if you can’t think of any yourself.  The ‘Research & Ideas’ category is exactly that – you can write little notes on whatever you want and even put in your bookmarks to keep a track of your online resources.

With these two panels on the side, you can tap into your notes whenever you want, even if it’s just to give you a reminder of what a character, place or object is supposed to look like.

Other features

At the bottom of the screen, there are 3 additional buttons: Help, Publish and Words.  There’s also supposed to be an extra function where the program will read out loud back to you what you’ve written – but it does not work for Windows Vista (which I have), so I can’t comment on it.

The ‘Help’ button has a few sub-categories, but there are really only 2 worth mentioning.  The first is ‘Writing the Opening Line of My Novel’, which gives generates a few opening lines for the procrastinators to get started.  The second is ‘Tips on Writing’, which has a few short chapters on writing tips, such as Surprises, Timing Structure etc.  This is a nice little thing to have, but the information is limited and static.  You’d be much better off finding more detailed information in books or online.

When you are finally done with the novel, you can click on the ‘Publish’ button to transform the novel into a PDF file.  NewNovelist files are unique – you cannot simply import them into Microsoft Word or other programs (but you can still do the old ‘cut and paste’). 

The third button, ‘Words’, is more or less a dictionary/thesaurus.  Again, while useful to have, I found that I could find much better and more extensive dictionaries/thesuaruses online.

Pros and Cons

NewNovelist 2 is a good program.  For me, it was just what I needed to organise all my thoughts and ideas and years of messy notes into one central source I can tap into with ease.  The right ‘Resources’ panel is what makes it worthwhile to own.  I’ve got biographies for almost 50 characters, descriptions for almost 40 locations and around 20 objects at my disposal.  The ‘Research and Ideas’ tab is also great – I’ve got all my useful writing resources stacked up in there, and more than a dozen notes from anything on geography to history to timelines for my novel.  The left ‘Chapters’ panel has also been quite helpful in preparing concise summaries for each chapter.  It really does make my writing a whole lot easier.

The program wizard that gets you started is good and bad.  For writers who aren’t really clear on what they want to do or are unsure of how the structure of a novel works, it can be very beneficial to pick a novel type/category and then have handy hints on how to tackle it.  It’s also good for writers to have lots of ideas and want to write lots of different styles of books.  However, the wizard tends to pigeon-hole novels into specific categories, and that doesn’t always work.  Novels can easily cross several genres and don’t necessarily belong in a particular category.  Writers who want to explore different styles and structures might find the wizard somewhat frustrating.

NewNovelist has gotten me on track with my novel, so I can’t complain about it.  But there are a few nagging problems with it that the makers of the software can hopefully fix by the 3rd version.

First, and the most obvious problem is the lack of a word count function.  I’m not even asking for a continuous word count – just something to tell you how many words you have in total.  So to count my words, I need to cut and paste from each chapter into Microsoft Word.  It’s annoying but it’s not fatal.

Second, the two panels on either side cannot remain open while you write in the middle.  This means I can’t read my chapter summary or my character attributes and write at the same time.  I’ve got to go into the panel, read it, then go back and write (or alternatively cut and paste it).  Again, annoying, but not a dealbreaker.

Third, the notes you can make in the ‘Research and Ideas’ tab – the space you get to write is awfully small.  You essentially need to scroll down after every couple of lines.  It would have been much better if you could enlarge or decrease the sizes of the various panels.

Fourth, the long loading time.  My laptop is not slow, but it takes ages to load up the novel.  It takes so long that I worry the machine is stuffed (because it usually says ‘Not Responding’ at the top) – you just need to be patient and wait, I suppose.

Fifth, if you accidentally press the ‘Close’ button (for the program), it only asks you if you want to save or not.  You don’t get to cancel and go back into the program.  I’ve done this a few times and it’s always irritating because it takes so long to load the program back up again.

Sixth, the writing resources.  It’s helpful for the novice but it’s not extensive enough.  They should either expand it considerably or provide links to more extensive resources online.

Lastly, there are a few nagging bugs here and there.  I just discovered last night that you can’t type more than a certain number of characters in a particular chapter.  If it gets too long, it stops you from typing – you just have to open up a new chapter and write in that.  Also, you always need to press ‘Done’ any time you update a Chapter or Character, Place or Object.  If you forget to do it and jump out of the panel, all is lost.  It’s your own fault but you can’t help but wish that it wasn’t like that.  And finally, sometimes the ‘Done’ button doesn’t even work – this usually happens if you type too much in the space or if you create too many sub-categories.

I hope I don’t sound too negative.  NewNovelist 2 has its problems, but it is its benefits that make it a good program to own for new aspiring novel writers.

Cringing at your old writings

January 31, 2009 in Fantasy, Novel, On Writing

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I cringe more when I read my writings than when I watch David Brent

Reading back on old writings can be cringeworthy.  I had a firsthand experience today.

My fantasy novel has been making decent progress lately.  Today I added another 5,000-6,000 words to boost the total word count to over 40,000 words (I even finished my first battle sequence!).  But not ALL of my work today was brand new.

I had been working on this novel on and off for 7 years (mostly off).  But until recently (when I decided to really give it a shot), I had never written chronologically.  Instead, I picked specific scenes that I felt like writing at the time.  As a result, it was a bit all over the place, and some scenes I even attempted more than once.

Anyway, today my novel finally reached a point where the story converged with some of my previous writings.  So I thought it would be real easy – just whip out my old writings and paste them in.  Not so easy.

I could not believe how shithouse my old stuff was.  It told a scene (a very good one too, in my humble opinion), but the writing was garbage.  There was no technique.  There was no emotion.  Even the grammar was bad.  How on earth did I ever think that stuff was any good before?  I’d understand if I was reading my first ‘novel’ attempt, a cliched teen horror story that didn’t make any sense.  That’s because I wrote it when I was 12.  But most of the stuff I read today was written in the last 3 or 4 years.  I’m not even close to being a good writer now, and yes, it was all first draft material, but reading that crap was still deeply depressing.

Am I the only one here?  Anyone else have the same experience?

I tried my best to adapt some of the old stuff into the new, but it was hard.  I ended up rewriting most of it, but at least the basic features of the scenes remained in tact.  Nevertheless, I think it saved me some time. 

The funny thing is, chances are I will read back at what I’m writing now some time in the near future and cringe the same way I did today.  Actually, I’m sure of it.  But at least that would mean I’m improving.

Latest Novel Progress!

January 30, 2009 in Fantasy, Novel, On Writing

It’s been a little while since I gave an update on the progress of my fantasy novel.

What I’ve been up to

If you just looked at my recent posts, it seems like I’ve been preoccupied with other things, such as the NBA All-Star selections, the upcoming Academy Awards, and other news items such as the 100-0 basketball game (I’ve noticed that whenever you mention “religion” or “Jesus” in a post, the hits go through the roof!). 

If you saw me at home, you would think that all I’ve been doing is study (still trying to catch up for the thousands of pages of readings, some dating back to last term!).

However, I have been working on the novel despite all these distractions.  I’ve been writing in the mornings, at nights, during study breaks.  Finding time, I suppose.  And I’ve been loving it!

Where I am up to

laughMy last novel update stated that I had just completed my first sword fight.  Well, now I’m right in the middle of my first battle and things are beginning to get exciting.  My fantasy world is finally starting to take shape, but it’s also only just the preliminary stage – a lot of wonderful and unique characters and fascinating worlds have yet to make an appearance.  I can’t wait to get to them.

I’ve been less worried about the rules and techniques of writing lately, which is probably why I am making more progress.  I’ve still yet to master “free-writing”, but I’ve abstained from reading over each sentence a dozen times before I move on to the next.  I would like things to move a little faster – I get impatient; I want to tell the next part of the story, but I also want to make the current part good.  It’s a dilemma.

Word count

It had been a while since my last word count.  I believe so far I’m on track to keep my promise of 10,000 words a week.  Anyway, the current word count is approximately 35,000 words!

However, I am having second thoughts about my prologue, and I think I will end up cutting it out completely.  It’s one of those prologues where you don’t know what the heck is happening until very later on, and it’s also quite similar in style and pace to the first chapter.  I spent a lot of time on it because it was the first thing I wrote, but I may have to let it go (sob).  If I do, the word count drops back to 33,000.

Next target is 50,000 words!

What’s next for this blog

The blog’s also been taking off a bit, glad to say.  I’ve been putting up posts on whatever I feel like lately, and I think it’s good.  Even though not everything is on writing, at least I’m writing it and keeping the creative juices flowing.  I’ve got a whole stack of ideas lined up, and I’ll be trying to get them out over the next few weeks.  I think I will also go back to doing more posts about writing techniques and fantasy writing resources – get back to my original plans for this blog a little more.

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