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How Important Is Structure?

March 16, 2010 in On Writing, Study

I really enjoyed last night’s screenwriting class.  We watched some intro scenes and short films and discussed the readings, which covered the importance of “structure” in a movie.

While there are no hard and fast rules, it did surprise me that most conventional films do have a three-act structure.  It’s just that we’re often too engrossed (or turned off) to notice it.  And there’s the more granular aspects, such as starting off with a set-up, a “hook”, so to speak, to capture the interest of the audience, then having a “catalyst” to get the story moving, then increasing the conflict through a couple of major turning points before the climax or final resolution.

Initially I was thinking that this was all too technical, too structured, too inhibiting.  But when I stepped back and looked at the examples, for some reason it seemed to ring true.  Then I looked at my own writings, and realised that my WIP fantasy novel actually had the exact same structure (broadly speaking).  It’s almost as though the structure came instinctively, or at least subconsciously from my years of movie watching.

So just how important is structure to a film?  With novels, it’s probably easier to manipulate structure, but with a film, it’s a lot trickier to get it right.  It’s much more difficult than I originally thought, and there is a real skill and art in telling the story in a way that makes the film intriguing.  It’s potentially even harder to nail the pace and rhythm and keep the screenplay tight.  Apparently, the problem with most films lies in the second half of the second act, when the action or pace of the film tends to lag because the writer is merely filling in time before the big climatic ending.

I also found it interesting how there are different ways to structure point of view.  There can be the “divergent” style where the audience is introduced to all the central characters at the very beginning, and then the story follows each of them separately (like say in The Godfather, which starts off with the wedding).  Or there can be the “convergent” style, where the characters are introduced separately but flow together inevitably all come together in the end (like say The English Patient).

Ultimately, it doesn’t really matter how a film is structured, as long as it works.  There’s no magic formula.  Take Tarantino’s films, for example, (most of) which I love.  Pulp Fiction‘s structure is all over the place, but I didn’t care.  I just wanted to go for the ride, wherever Tarantino was taking me.  From Dusk Till Dawn is another good example, where the first half of the movie is a hold-up/hostage scenario, and then suddenly it becomes an all-out crazy vampire movie halfway through.  But it works too.

And there’s no need for the introductory set-up to let the audience know what kind of film it is going to be.  In some cases, I actually preferred films that kept me in the dark, kept me wondering “what the heck is this movie about?” (like Michael Clayton) because nothing seems to make sense, but then eventually all the pieces are put back together like a jigsaw, and you marvel at the brilliance of it because all the clues were foreshadowed right from the beginning.  It’s that type of inventive, experimental, structure-breaking creativity that makes certain films truly memorable.

That said, for my first piece (which will be assessed), I’m going to stick with the traditional structure to see how it pans out, and then maybe try something a little different to spice it up a little.

[PS: it seems I should also check out the Harrison Ford movie "Witness", which is apparently an excellent example of the traditional three-act structure.]

Clottey Stinks It Up As Pacquiao Dominates

March 14, 2010 in Boxing

I just got back from watching the Manny Pacquiao – Joshua Clottey fight at a public venue with a mega screen.

The atmosphere was electric, and I think I am going a little deaf from the noise of the live crowd, who acted like they were there at Cowboys Stadium in Dallas along with the 51,000 other boxing fans.  Or should I say Manny Pacquiao fans.

Pacquiao cruises to unanimous victory in a virtual shut-out

Oh, the result.  As expected, Pacquiao dominated over 12 rounds to win an easy unanimous decision (120-108, 119-109, 119-109) against a bizarrely passive Clottey, who spent most of the night covering up.  Sure, he avoided getting knocked out like Pacquiao’s previous four opponents, but Clottey never really gave himself a chance out there.

On the rare occasions Clottey did decide to engage, he was very effective, landing some solid jabs and jolting uppercuts on Pacquiao’s jaw, creating a noticeable bruise under the Pacman’s right eye.  But Clottey never followed it up and Pacquiao was never in danger.  To be honest, Clottey stunk up the joint.  Pacquiao (and the fans) wanted a fight and tried to goad Clottey into trading, but for some inexplicable reason Clottey just stood there, covering up, and only threw a couple of punches here and there so that people won’t think Pacquiao’s just in the ring by himself punching a slab of black marble.

From the third round onwards, Clottey’s corner kept telling him to throw more punches and take chances, but Clottey refused to open up.  Even when they told him he was losing every round, Clottey was still going out there and doing the same thing.

On the other hand, Pacquiao was in and out all night, throwing stiff shots from all angles and every now and then a crazy barrage that kept Clottey covering up like a turtle.  Most of Pacquiao’s shots to the head were blocked or partially blocked by Clottey’s gloves and arms, but he did manage to land a fair few ripping body shots, especially at the start of the fight.  Towards the later rounds, the blows were starting to penetrate the defense, bloodying Clottey’s nose and driving him into the ropes a few times, but to Clottey’s credit he didn’t go down or look to be in serious trouble.

Pacquiao landed 246 of 1,231 punches (20%) while Clottey was limited to landing 108 of 399 punches (27%).

So yeah, the fight was still pretty exciting thanks to Pacquiao’s offense and multiple punch combinations (like seven or eight in a second), but Clottey prevented it from being a good fight.  He didn’t get knocked out, and he got a big payday, but that was about it.  After this performance, it’s no surprise Clottey isn’t a bigger star, and it’s unlikely he’ll ever be.

What the boxers said after the fight

Manny Pacquiao

“It was not an easy fight. He’s a good fighter. I threw a lot of jabs in the beginning to counter his hook and uppercut. I felt his power. He’s so strong. I could tell he was looking to land the big shot throughout the fight.”

“I was in control from the first round, but I never felt overconfident.”

“He took a lot of punches and never even seemed hurt.”

Re inability to get the KO: “I am not disappointed. I know he is a defensive fighter. I felt some of his punches. I was focussed on a strategy to dominate him.”

Joshua Clottey

“He has very good movement. He has great speed. It was very difficult for me to handle. I didn’t feel Manny’s power. It’s just that his speed was too much for me.”

“He has speed, I lost the fight. He’s fast, that’s why I was taking my time.”

“I won a couple of rounds. I don’t think I lost all the rounds.”

“I always accept defeat. I didn’t lose to (Miguel) Cotto or (Antonio) Margarito but I did lose to Manny Pacquiao.”

“I want to apologize to my fans. Next time, I’ll come back big.”

Freddie Roach (Pacquiao’s trainer)

“I thought we won every round. We pressured him. He had a good defense but good defense isn’t enough to win the fight.”

“He fought a defensive fight. When you fight for the world title it is a once in a lifetime opportunity. I thought he would have thrown more punches. He was in survival mode and when guy is trying to survive it is hard to knock him out.”

Lenny de Jesus (Clottey’s trainer)

“Joshua had the power to knock him out, but was reluctant to punch. We clearly got beat. I don’t think we won a round.”

Bob Arum (promoter)

“What was he supposed to do? If he played offense he’d get knocked out. I can’t blame the kid for trying to wear him down.”

On the potential bout with Floyd Mayweather Jr (provided he beats Shane Mosley)

Pacquiao: “The people want that fight, they want to see that fight. It’s up to him. For me, it’s no problem to fight him. I will fight him any time. He should win against Mosley. If not, Mosley and I will fight. [Mayweather's] style is not a difficult style. He needs to handle his business in his next fight.”

“I want that fight, the world wants that fight, but it’s up to him. I’m ready to fight any time.”

Roach: “It’s the fight the world wants to see. Me and Manny want to see it. Floyd, let the commission do their job. You don’t run the sport. Get in the ring and fight us.”

Arum: “Manny will break down any defense. He never gets tired. He throws a million punches. If Mayweather doesn’t come out of his shell Manny will pile up the points like he did tonight. When you’re in with a buzz saw, it’s very difficult to do anything. Manny prevented Clottey from throwing his punches by throwing his own punches, and he throws from so many angles.”

Undercard action

The undercard was a bit of a snore fest.  The match-ups suggested slug fests but they were all tactical fights, with a couple going the full distance.

Of the notable bouts: Humberto Soto dominated former Pacquiao victim David Diaz via unanimous decision.  Alfonso Gomez made Jose Luis Castillo quit after the fifth round.  John Duddy took a split decision from Michael Medina.

That’s about it.

Final thoughts

  • Great crowd, but seriously, most of the people there would have had no idea what was going on sitting so far away from the ring.  They would have had to watch the screens.  Watching the ring would have been like watching two ants in a matchbox.
  • What a bloody long walk to the ring for both fighters!  I was worried they’d be too tired to fight by the time they finally got there.
  • Clottey showed the best Prince Naseem Hamed impersonation with his hilarious dancing all the way to the ring.  Even his corner got into it.  Pacquiao should sing and Clottey should dance.
  • What was the deal with the Dallas Cowboys cheerleaders singing the American national anthem?  Hilarious.  To be honest though, they were surprisingly good.
  • Good on Manny for using a double-handed head squeeze on Clottey just to try and wake him up.  Unfortunately, it didn’t work.
  • And if (and it’s a big if) Mayweather can down Mosley and if (an even bigger if) the fight with Pacquiao can be made, it’s hard to see Mayweather winning unless he takes some big risks or can somehow land a big counter to knock Manny out.  Otherwise, the most likely outcome is Pacquiao by unanimous decision.

DVD Blitz!

March 13, 2010 in Movie Reviews

I had initially planned on doing separate reviews for all of these DVDs I watched over the last couple of weeks, but I decided it was wasting too much of my life.  I need to focus on my studies and my novels more, and less on blogging.

Maybe I’ll eventually get around to reviewing them in full on 7Tavern.  But for now, here are some brief reviews.

The Taking of Pelham 123

I expected a bit of a stinker and my expectations were fulfilled. John Travolta was a shocker in this one (simply swearing a lot doesn’t make a villain cool or menacing or interesting), and Denzel feels the same as always. There were a couple of decent moments and flashes of excitement that prevented the film from being a total disaster, but on the whole this was one to forget.

2 out of 5

Never Back Down

Teenage mixed martial arts movie with all the expected crap that comes with it – average acting, bad dialogue and predictable flow. Good fight scenes though. Cam Gigandet’s evil smile reminded me of a chiseled Hayden Christensen.

2 out of 5

Redbelt

I was getting my MMA fix.  Hard hitting, both physically and emotionally, in true Mamet-style. For once a martial arts film that deals with more than just punching and kicking. Keeps you wondering where it would take you next. Awesome.

4 out of 5

Whatever Works

Look, it’s not a bad film. It’s just that Larry David is annoying enough for half an hour on Curb, so Larry David for 92 minutes straight gets a bit…

And it’s hard to ignore the fact that the movie is written and directed by Woody Allen, and surprise surprise, it’s about the relationship between a misunderstood old man and a girl that is far too young to be married to him. Thankfully, it’s not his daughter. 

2.5 out of 5

The Hangover

Maybe I expected too much. The Hangover is pretty good but not as gut-bustingly hilarious as I thought it would be. That said, it could have been way worse. Ken Jeong is an absolute classic.

3 out of 5

Lost Boys: The Tribe

Long awaited sequel to the 87 classic went pretty much according to script. B-grade all the way, but that doesn’t mean it was destined to be crap. I liked the tongue-in-cheek moments but there was too much serious stuff mixed in there which made it uneven. It could have been worse, I suppose.  RIP Corey Haim.

2 out 5

Michael Clayton

Oozes class all the way through. A tremendous opening sequence, an intriguing plot, and handled with style and precision. A well-made, gripping thriller.

4 out of 5

Fool’s Gold

Should have been simply titled “Fools”. Horrible plot (where is the adventure? People sit around, talk, and figure out where the treasure is?), annoying characters, and action without excitement. And it’s 110 minutes! And the ultimate killer blow? Matthew McConaughey.

1.5 out of 5

Did I mention I’ve been kinda busy lately?

Late addition – can’t believe I saw this film but totally forgot about it!

Vantage Point

Pretty clever idea and a great cast, but unfortunately they didn’t nail it. Despite the gimmick, in the end it turned out to be a rather pedestrian thriller plot. That said, there were some exciting scenes and at 90 minutes, the film didn’t outstay its welcome.

3 out of 5

Character and Characterization

March 13, 2010 in Novel, On Writing

The heck d'ya mean? Character and characterization are different things?

So I’m catching up with my readings and I stumble across a few articles about “character” and “characterization”, which has me thinking about my stagnant fantasy novel and this new project I have in the works.

In both the planning and writing phases, I’ve been doing a lot of “characterization” – you know, what the character looks like, how old they are, their personality and habits, their qualities and follies.  But I haven’t given enough thought to the “character” of these…um..characters.

I’ve always had trouble getting into the heads of my characters.  I am quick to create them, but rarely do I put myself in their shoes, find out what motivates them, what frightens them – what they are truly about.  According to this McKee article I read:

TRUE CHARACTER is revealed in the choices of a human being makes under pressure – the greater the pressure, the deeper the revelation, the truer the choice to the character’s essential nature.

Yes, he’s right!  And then I realised that I actually have numerous high pressure situations where my characters have an opportunity to show what they are really about under the surface, but I never explored it.  Not properly, anyway.  No wonder I feel like things aren’t working despite what I feel is a good plot.

Another thing I’ve been wondering is whether I’ve been creating too many characters – so many that I don’t have time to give them the time or chance to get to know them.  Should I keep them and give them more “screen time”?  Or should I get rid of them completely?  It’s a difficult balance, and it’s something I have to work out by myself.

So three lessons from all of this.  One, “characterization” is easy, developing “character” is hard.  I need to start imagining myself in the bodies of my characters and get inside their psyche.  Two, true character is revealed through the choices people make.  I need to rewrite some of my scenes to bring that out.  Three, superfluous characters need to be canned, key characters with a purpose need to be explored.

Now I will go take a nap.

[PS: apparently, Aristotle considered the importance of both plot and character, and concluded that story is primary, character secondary.  Can't both be equally important?]

Movie Review: From Paris with Love (2009)

March 12, 2010 in Movie Reviews

Taken was one of my favourite films of 2008, and one of the best action movies I had seen in years.  From Paris with Love has the same director (Pierre Morel), and Luc Besson worked on both screenplays, so needless to say, expectations were high.

Unfortunately, From Paris with Love is not even close.  It tells the story of James Reese (played by Jonathan Rhys Meyers), a personal aide to a US Ambassador in Paris, who is drawn into a wild terrorist plot thanks to his crazy new partner Charlie Wax (John Travolta).

Well, From Paris with Love has some fairly good action scenes, but it’s far too loud, noisy and repetitious.  It’s all guns blazing, fast cars, explosions, and f-bombs.  However, most of it is wrapped in humour, and because of that, it lacks that edginess that Taken had.

Like Taken, the film is totally preposterous, but at least in Taken, you could allow yourself accept the reckless carnage because Liam Neeson was a man on a mission to save his daughter.  But in From Paris with Love, Travolta’s Wax just comes off as an over-the-top nutjob who simply wants to kill everyone.

I don’t know what the deal is.  Travolta as Vincent Vega in Pulp Fiction was perfect.  He was cool, charming, and likable.  But for some reason, being a gun-toting, wise-cracking bad ass in his two recent films, From Paris with Love and The Taking of Pelham 123, just doesn’t work for Travolta.  Perhaps it’s the dialogue or the appearance – either way, Travolta feels obnoxious and looks like he’s trying too hard.

That said, From Paris with Love is not all bad.  Some of the jokes do work, and there is occasional excitement.  Plus Jonathan Rhys Meyers is excellent as always, making Reese’s relationship with Wax an enjoyable focus of the movie.  But none of that really makes up for a sub-par film.

2.5 out of 5 stars!

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